Mastronet, I may be wrong here but let's here opinions??

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Posted By: barrysloate

Okay- let me rephrase and give credit where it is due.

The research that goes into each catalog is second to none. I have been in the hobby 25 years and when I read some of the really meaty parts I learn something new every time. And I always love learning new things.

But my point has more to do with style and usage. I guess from my own training as a graduate student in English Lit, and subsequently as a teacher, I learned to write succinctly and to the point. I know a catalog is not a novel, and it is also not a term paper, but it still can implement an efficient writing style. Give me any long winded lot description from one of your catalogs, and let me rewrite it in about half the number of words. And I bet I can do it more clearly, maintain the historical context, and even throw in a little hype to let prospective bidders know what a great piece it is.

Edited to add I see you asked me to provide you with some examples. If I have time today, can I put one or two on the board and let others see if they agree with me? I'll go back to your last major auction catalog. Just let me know if the board is an acceptable venue.