David,
First of all, thank you for your wonderful work. Your informal style makes the subject matter accessible.
I glanced through, and then went back to read carefully. At present, I am only on page 40, but I noticed that you will be finalizing on Friday. Here are several stylistic and typographical errors; I thought it might help to share them with you.
P. 13, par. 2, "tarnish has come to [the] surface." P. 16, par. 2, "essential to identify[ing] and dating." P. 21, par. 3, "It just has to [be] accurately described." P. 30 par. 1, "or the archives of a magazine the [should be 'he'}worked for."
I have enjoyed reading the materials on your website, just as I am enjoying this new work. Thank you once again, and best of luck.
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