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Posted By: davidcycleback

The MastroNet writers know grammar and can put together sentences, and the introductary stories are often interesting. I also understand that they're going to hype. My single recommendation to the writers is that they stick to normal adjectives and nouns, especially when describing something like a Topps baseball card.

I add that I'm not trying to be mean, and hesitated to criticize as I understand that behind the big auction houses are real people who work hard.

When writing copy for my own auctions, it's a balancing act between explaining to the beginner and insulting the intelligence of the experienced collector. Whichever way I describe, the rule is the description has to be accurate. If the description and words choice are accurate, there's nothing to appologize for. If an item is described as 'unique' that should mean there isn't a second ... On a few occasions, after reading my own eBay description I've convinced myself to keep the item. I think that counts as a sale.