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Posted By: barrysloate

Doug- the historical background is extremely useful and I agree by saving the catalog you are, in that sense, preserving a great reference tool.

But the poorly constructed sentences, and the misuse of words, have nothing to do with it. Stick to the facts, and take out 75% of the fluff. A little puffery is good marketing, but we are talking simply about awkward writing.